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哈達 | 14th Mar 2006, 20:46 PM | 小說 | (334 Reads)

第一次作小說,有文法錯誤的

但也希望大家看看吧...

P.S.小說內的人名和地名是來自一些動漫作品,

大家看完一定要留言唷!!!=w=emoticon

 

The end of day(序)

  In 2010,all the government of Earth were not be friendly any more.No diplomacy(外交),any place was safe,no stock and share(股市).Only have many hatred on it...

  In 2012,all government were on the warpath,all of they were useing the most bad,most disasterous weapon to fight.that thing is nuclear weapons.They were use it crazily......Minimum they had use 20 times on the "world war"......After 2 years,the earth's axis was emerge variation,the world was begun a mess......

  The "nuclear winter(核冬天,註1)"starts and 95% people were dead.And the 5% people were live at the cave ,and ruin city.They were very hard to live......

  They were all waiting for a person come to help them......

註1:核冬天(Carl Lagan等科學家認為核子戰爭爆發後,地球上空氣中煙塵瀰漫,遮蔽天日,天寒地凍,一切生物終將毀滅)

序完了,大家覺得怎樣???>///


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我也加你哦...有時間我一定會到你那兒看的。希望之後也能見到你
這個是英文的?厲害。


[引用] | 作者 小嵐 | 14th Mar 2006 22:52 PM | [舉報垃圾留言]

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不錯呢,我好久沒看過英文小說了.好有未來戰士feel.


[引用] | 作者 Carson | 15th Mar 2006 00:17 AM | [舉報垃圾留言]

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繼續寫啦!^^


[引用] | 作者 jovi | 15th Mar 2006 07:17 AM | [舉報垃圾留言]